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Critique
October 8, 2010
Let's not criticize,
but critique with open eyes.
Let's not help,
but aid without guilt.
Let's not walk,
but briskly move.
Let's not follow,
but patiently pursue.
Let's not hear,
but quietly listen.
Let's not shine bright,
but gallantly glisten.
Let's....
Be different.
© Dustin B., Nikiski, AK
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This article has 6 comments.
Treckintime SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 12:05 pm
lol. i think i know who it is... but thank :d lol
youknowwhoitis said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 12:19 am
ummmm this is the best poem ever and i really truthfully love it.it touched me (not in the way your thinking) so much. A LOT! soooo keep writing.
Electricity PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 7:46 pm
It’s simple, sweat, and too the point, which is pleasant to read. I like the consistent pattern of the poem, until the ending. Putting "let's be different" at the end was a nice touch- it tied the ending of the poem together. It also makes the reader think about for a second.
Treckintime SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 5:48 pm
thanks if you could like send this poem to other friends you know that use teen ink i would greatly appreciate it, because i dont have but one friend that uses teenink. but thanks :D
