October 4, 2010
By Marisa Ramirez BRONZE, Bolingbrook, Illinois
Marisa Ramirez BRONZE, Bolingbrook, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 0 comments

I miss your face
I miss your hair
I miss how you would take me anywhere
I miss your eyes
I miss your touch
Oh my god I love you so much
I miss your voice
I miss your smell
I miss the times when you would make me well
I miss the times when it was just you and me
And we got to be whoever we wanted to be
I miss the times when I was sade and down
And I counted on you cause you were always around
I have these dreams when you're by my side
And I never want that feeling to die
I see your smile
I hear your laugh
And I feel like we're having a blast
When your hand was in mine and mine in your's it felt real and that was for sure
Your skin was soft
Your breathing was smooth
I felt so nervous I didn't know what to do
When you smiled at me I couldn't help but smile back
And the same thing happened with the laugh
I felt like we were one
And it had only begun
When I heard the same gunshot sound and opened my eyes
Before I knew it the dream was done

The author's comments:
This poem was to a close friend of mine

Similar Articles


This article has 0 comments.


MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!