October 5, 2010
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I never could here the ocean
In the colored homes of crabs
But when I held them to my ear
I swear I heard the sound of laughter

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so_joy said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 5:23 pm

I like this a lot. As ThatBlondGuy said, short and sweet. Great topic, too. Good job! Keep writing!

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ThatBlondGuy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 2, 2010 at 3:39 pm
Hey, I love it! Short and sweet. The ending is what pulls it off because the reader is expecting "the sound of waves." Instead we get "the sound of laughter."
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