Speak those Words

October 3, 2010
By BrendanRG BRONZE, Burlington, Massachusetts
BrendanRG BRONZE, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"In this bright future you can't forget your past."


Hold your breath
Tell a whisper
Make the sound of silence
Become the dream I see
White teeth show
Lips curl and tongue shows
Words show truth in the dark
We only know how to speak one way
Behind light
We hide and speak
With no regrets or somber


The author's comments:
Lies from someone special.

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on Oct. 19 2010 at 9:57 am
BrendanRG BRONZE, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"In this bright future you can't forget your past."

This is one of the worst poems I've ever written lol. I like how everyone critiques and doesn't tell me what's wrong with it. It's here so people can tell me how to fix it :)

babycakesss said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:33 pm
I don't like this poem. No offense. I don't think it's written very well.

dylan134 said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 10:32 pm
Good poem. I like the contrast of light and dark

writerman said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 10:30 pm
This is good stuff. Keep it up

on Oct. 17 2010 at 6:44 pm
Dragonscribe BRONZE, West Lafayette, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"A Person's a Person no Matter how Small"
and
"A Rose by Any Other Name Would Smell as Sweet"
and
"God helps those who help themselves"

...or somber what?

SMOKEKUSH420 said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 1:02 pm
holy shit this is awesome

rudaman36 said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 12:38 am
hey man, this is awesome keep writing


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