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September 27, 2010
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you, you trace
your eyes in
permanent ink
because you want
to make your mark
on all you look upon.

and you, you drink
your own blood
from a plastic cup
because you want
to know how
your heart tastes.

and you, you say
you've given up,
you want to die,
because you want
to see if i
really cared
all this time.

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dancestar said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 9:00 am
that was really gud...and one of a kind...great job! it was very deep....keep writing!
Mikaela said...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 7:39 pm
This is very unique... makes me think of song lyrics. ;) I like the fascinating insight!
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