why not me

September 27, 2010
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.


it hurts me so much
to see the way you look at her.
so obviously in love
feelings get more insecure.
it doesn't add up
at least not in my head
how she interests you more
this just goes unsaid
i may be too much
come on a bit too strong
but i always mean well
you just take it so wrong
my chance is now gone
but how dumb are you
to pass up a girl
who would always remain true
my dreams are now nightmares
because it shows me
everything that could of happened
you and i turned to we
just a blur in the past
in a wink of an eye
you fall out of my life
without saying goodbye.


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on Oct. 27 2010 at 1:30 pm
fatesknocking GOLD, Solon, Ohio
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Prayers go up and blessings come down.

this is beautiful. you have such a talent my friend.

on Oct. 24 2010 at 7:27 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

ughhh writing is my escape!

on Oct. 24 2010 at 6:43 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

I KNOW! :(

on Oct. 23 2010 at 2:55 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

its so hard!

on Oct. 23 2010 at 2:54 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

thank you so much

on Oct. 23 2010 at 1:55 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe
"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love."
— Marilyn Monroe
"Who said nights were for sleep?"
— Marilyn Monroe
"Sex is part of nature. I go along with nature."
— Marilyn Monroe

Wow this just takes my breath away

on Oct. 22 2010 at 9:41 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

wow. I can totally relate to this poem too....it  reminds me of my last year love life...itotally understand </3

on Oct. 21 2010 at 3:03 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

im glad you understand!

on Oct. 21 2010 at 3:03 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

thank you so much! it means a lot to me!

on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:42 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

this is so touching. you are such a good writer and i totally envy you! i love this

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. keep writing


on Oct. 9 2010 at 2:56 pm
alihadley14 GOLD, Glasford, Illinois
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"Truth is, everyone's going to hurt you, you just have to find the ones worth suffering for." -Bob Marley
"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." -Plato

amen. </3


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