Crimson Emotion

Sharp words in the form of razor blades
Shoved deep into apprehensive skin.
Crimson emotion pours out;
A silent release that says it all
Without the uttering of a single word.





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alanacarlene said...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 6:45 pm

LOL!!!! Whew!!!! Ok this is a sweet and simple poem that's to the point and its filled with your awesomness! 6 STARS all the way (if there were 6 haha)

So I saw the whole "bring self-injury" and was about to freak out but then I read the comments whew! You almost gave me a heart attack Alex!!!! But it's ok on the title of one of my pics I spelled "Ant's" wrong :/ lol

but this is one of my faves!!!

What else of yours is new that I haven't read???

 
genesis27000 said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 11:23 pm
Don't worry. It'll be okay..:) Pinky promise:)).... I think? ;)
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 7:48 am
Ahw man! I meant bring self-injury to an end!!! Not bring self-injury!!!! Dang it! :P I always mess up on the important stuff :/
 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 9:44 pm
deep... so deep. Wow. I love it. Just like the rest of your work. You just keep inspiring me. Keep it up.
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 7:49 am
Thank Elly :/
 
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