Love Letter

September 12, 2010
By blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Losers always talk about doing their best..............Winners always walk away defeating the rest.


You are not my friend, You are not my foe,
But I wish you were my Juliet and I was your Romeo
To you I may be a stranger,
But to me you are my angel

Because of you,
My heart experiences a new pain,
Even though it does hurt,
It gives me a comfort
But why do not you understand this,
My love is a feeling of bliss

You stole my heart,
Its not a crime,
But I just wish,
You could be mine
I chose to be lonely,
You came in my heart,
And killed me slowly

My love is not a big love story
But without you my life is no glory
To get you I am ready to go down on my knees,
Because your heart is the only thing I want to sieze
I will love you till my last breath,
I dont care even if i have to face death.



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on Nov. 1 2010 at 8:59 am
blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Losers always talk about doing their best..............Winners always walk away defeating the rest.

ty buddy..........................:)

on Nov. 1 2010 at 8:59 am
blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
7 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Losers always talk about doing their best..............Winners always walk away defeating the rest.

ty buddy..................:)

on Oct. 28 2010 at 7:48 am
blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Losers always talk about doing their best..............Winners always walk away defeating the rest.

yuri im nt in luv nd thnx for da compliment

Yuri said...
on Oct. 28 2010 at 7:47 am
ally sweet nd nice poetry.............u must be in love

on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:48 am
blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
7 articles 0 photos 19 comments

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Losers always talk about doing their best..............Winners always walk away defeating the rest.

thank you soo much

on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:47 am
blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Losers always talk about doing their best..............Winners always walk away defeating the rest.

TY ARON...........:D

on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:47 am
blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Losers always talk about doing their best..............Winners always walk away defeating the rest.

TY DAVID................SURE I WILL WORK ON IT

David said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:43 am
can improve a little more on construction of sentences............but as a beginner it is really good

Aron said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:38 am
nyc work..........you are worth something great............:D

Andrea said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:36 am
the words are soo powerful

on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:33 am
blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Losers always talk about doing their best..............Winners always walk away defeating the rest.

ty magnum............:)

Magnum said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:30 am
amazing stuff buddy.............<3 it

on Oct. 10 2010 at 9:45 am
blackflame SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Losers always talk about doing their best..............Winners always walk away defeating the rest.

thank you so much guys............i thought i will hav to work on it a but more or sumthing............i nvr knew this would do so good...........so thank you very much

on Oct. 6 2010 at 8:36 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow...this is so good!! your ending is so powerful. you are such a good writer

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job on this. keep writing!


on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:31 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Pretty delicate stuff, my friend. It's very romantic (in a breakup/broken hearted kind of way). You articulated the emotion very well and with great wording. This is a fairly powerful piece, so well done. :)


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