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You are not my friend, You are not my foe,
But I wish you were my Juliet and I was your Romeo
To you I may be a stranger,
But to me you are my angel

Because of you,
My heart experiences a new pain,
Even though it does hurt,
It gives me a comfort
But why do not you understand this,
My love is a feeling of bliss

You stole my heart,
Its not a crime,
But I just wish,
You could be mine
I chose to be lonely,
You came in my heart,
And killed me slowly

My love is not a big love story
But without you my life is no glory
To get you I am ready to go down on my knees,
Because your heart is the only thing I want to sieze
I will love you till my last breath,
I dont care even if i have to face death.





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Yuri said...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 7:47 am
ally sweet nd nice poetry.............u must be in love
 
Jana.R replied...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 7:48 am
yuri im nt in luv nd thnx for da compliment
 
Jana.R said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:48 am
thank you soo much
 
Jana.R said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:47 am
TY ARON...........:D
 
Jana.R said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:47 am
TY DAVID................SURE I WILL WORK ON IT
 
David said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:43 am
can improve a little more on construction of sentences............but as a beginner it is really good
 
Aron said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:38 am
nyc work..........you are worth something great............:D
 
Andrea said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:36 am
the words are soo powerful
 
Jana.R said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:33 am
ty magnum............:)
 
Magnum said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:30 am
amazing stuff buddy.............<3 it
 
Jana.R said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 9:45 am
thank you so much guys............i thought i will hav to work on it a but more or sumthing............i nvr knew this would do so good...........so thank you very much
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 8:36 pm

wow...this is so good!! your ending is so powerful. you are such a good writer

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job on this. keep writing!

 
Jana.R replied...
Nov. 1, 2010 at 8:59 am
ty buddy..........................:)
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:31 pm
Pretty delicate stuff, my friend. It's very romantic (in a breakup/broken hearted kind of way). You articulated the emotion very well and with great wording. This is a fairly powerful piece, so well done. :)
 
Jana.R replied...
Nov. 1, 2010 at 8:59 am
ty buddy..................:)
 
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