Really Like Me Too

I love your dark brown eyes,
your dirty-blonde hair.
how you squint when you smile,
how you laugh, its not fair.

You drew me a picture, called it
"Tiger-type thing."
i took it and laughed, you are amazing.

Are You Nervous, is our favorite game.
you always win, 'cause you make me smile.

At the school dance, you hugged me
and said "I'm getting one from everyone,"
But we both know..thats a lie.

Maybe I'm misreading it, god knows
i hope not.
'Cause I really like you.

Please, really like me too.





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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 8:39 pm

such a touching piece! i can really feel your emotion through your words. youre a great writer

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job on this. keep writing!

 
emergingtalent said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 4:26 pm

wow! I loved  this! I could totally relate to this! Thank you!

 

 
.iloveyou. said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 3:01 pm
This is amazing. I love it. Such emotion put into a few lines. :)
 
DearFalcon12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 4:33 pm
Thanks so much! If you like this one, check out "I Know" its about the same guy :D
 
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