Jet in the Sky

September 12, 2010
By RoseVanWyngarden BRONZE, Houston, Texas
RoseVanWyngarden BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Gotta get these pants outta the drawer, man"


I will never be ready to let you go
I keep a lock on my thoughts
At all times
Because It hurts too much to know
You won't let me keep you forever
Dreams are flying colors that make me doubt
That life is something to think about
All in all, I guess it'll be okay
But when you break my heart
I still think I will stay
But my thoughts will go away
And I won't think about much at all
Not life, not death
No other heart could break my fall
I'm floating on a feeling you make
You kiss my cheek, but i don't break
I guess I'm stronger than before
Before I found out there's more
Another reason to live.
I want to rip up my bad situation
My unimportant complication
Anything to keep you loving me.
I'm working out all my problems in my head
Remember all you need
Just remember what i said
I may run away from my problems
When there's nothing else to do
I'd hate myself forever if I chased you away
Because I'd never run away from you.


The author's comments:
I think the whole idea of just loving someone so much that it hurts to think about when they will stop loving you inspired me. Young love. The shortest kind of love. I know the person I love right now loves me, but for how long? That's the question that leaves a heart hanging.

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on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:48 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Oh! So you were that girl in that black Pink Floyd shirt walking around in the grocery store biting your nails! I was wondering who that was...

on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:47 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I found this poem to be much more mature and well written than most poems of this type of subject. You had great wording, like "dreams are flying colors that make me doubt that life is something to think about." This is a great piece!


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