Let it Go

August 20, 2010
By TaliaWolf SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
TaliaWolf SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I mean this girl was beautiful, and I'm from Miami where beautiful people go to spawn"
Alex Flinn


Close your eyes
Let it go
Fill your lungs
Let it go
Open your eyes
Let it go
Let it go
Let it go
Fill your lungs
Let it go
Hands to face
Fingers to eyes
Fill your lungs
Let it go
One step
Two steps
Three
Stop.
Close your eyes
Let it go
Open your eyes
Fill your lungs
Lift your chin
Brush it off
Let it go
And
Begin
Again.


The author's comments:
written in response to some pretty big shocks to my system today.

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on Oct. 2 2010 at 3:26 pm
TaliaWolf SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I mean this girl was beautiful, and I'm from Miami where beautiful people go to spawn"
Alex Flinn

Thank you for reading my work! I love comments and I'll make sure to read yours as well

on Oct. 2 2010 at 3:23 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

wow, i can almost imagine this as a scene in a movie... very descriptive with few words... the repetition works really well. read some of mine?




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