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Close your eyes
Let it go
Fill your lungs
Let it go
Open your eyes
Let it go
Let it go
Let it go
Fill your lungs
Let it go
Hands to face
Fingers to eyes
Fill your lungs
Let it go
One step
Two steps
Three
Stop.
Close your eyes
Let it go
Open your eyes
Fill your lungs
Lift your chin
Brush it off
Let it go
And
Begin
Again.




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Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 3:23 pm:
wow, i can almost imagine this as a scene in a movie... very descriptive with few words... the repetition works really well. read some of mine?
 
TaliaWolf replied...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 3:26 pm :
Thank you for reading my work! I love comments and I'll make sure to read yours as well
 
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