Personality

September 17, 2010
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I just love to be me
I have a great personality
I refuse to act like somthing im not
If i do i might end up in jail or shot
I hate when others try to fit in
At least stick out every now and then
Be proud of who you are
Shine brighter then any star
Show your true personality
Then you will see who your friends should really be





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 7:57 pm

Well said, my friend!

You have wise thoughts on the matter.

 
Heartless911 replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 10:24 am

you think i did good?

 

 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:00 pm
Indeed.... very good.
 
Heartless911 replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 9:28 am
i appritate it what do u think made the poem worth reading?
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 4:37 pm

What made it worth reading? I suppose it was the strong love of individuality that you put into the poem.

And the rhythm was quite nice, too.

 
Heartless911 replied...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 9:40 am
i appritate all your feedback and im happy my poem affected u
 
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