Personality

September 17, 2010
By OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"


I just love to be me
I have a great personality
I refuse to act like somthing im not
If i do i might end up in jail or shot
I hate when others try to fit in
At least stick out every now and then
Be proud of who you are
Shine brighter then any star
Show your true personality
Then you will see who your friends should really be


The author's comments:
i just get tired of people trying to get exceped becuse they were being someone else so i want all to know what you should do.

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on Oct. 7 2010 at 9:40 am
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"

i appritate all your feedback and im happy my poem affected u

on Oct. 6 2010 at 4:37 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

What made it worth reading? I suppose it was the strong love of individuality that you put into the poem.

And the rhythm was quite nice, too.


on Oct. 6 2010 at 9:28 am
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"

i appritate it what do u think made the poem worth reading?

on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:00 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Indeed.... very good.

on Oct. 5 2010 at 10:24 am
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"

you think i did good?

 


on Oct. 2 2010 at 7:57 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Well said, my friend!

You have wise thoughts on the matter.



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