Be Mine For Always (Inspired By The Notebook)

September 16, 2010
By Anonymous

What'll become of my spirit?
What'll become of my soul?
Without you around,
Without your hand to hold?

Will I shiver?
Will I shine?
Without your eyes
Staring into mine?

Are we destined to be?
Are we meant to last forever?
If it was up to me,
I wouldn't let you go…Ever.

You'd be mine for always.
Never would we part.
We'd stay together for eternity.
I'd forever be in your arms and in your heart.

Your laugh would make me smile
On our wedding day
And with you by my side
The days would quickly pass away.

And when we're old and have grey hair
I'll still be smiling then
As long as you're still next to me
And we're remembering “way back when.”

And if you should pass away,
And my eyes become blind from crying.
I'll go through each day in memory of you
And live as if I'm dying.


My soul's last night on earth
Would be a happy memory
Because your face in my dreams
Would be the last thing that I see.

This would be our life's story
If you stayed here by my side
And if, by chance, our attempts fail at least we'll know we tried."


The author's comments:
This Piece Was Inspired by The NOTEBOOK by nicholas Sparks

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on Jan. 7 2012 at 8:08 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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Thank you so much

on Dec. 7 2010 at 10:48 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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LOL I KNOW ITS U SARA!

THANK U SO MUCH!

I HOPE I WILL GET PUBLISHED BY A 'FANCY ' COMPANY!

LOL


Saraxoxo said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 10:34 pm
Omg, this is amazing! I've never heard anything like this mostly from a teenage girl! Wow, u are a fantastic poet and you're definitely going to get published some day by a really fancy and awesome publishing company! I really love the movie the notebook and I adore the book, this poem describes it beautifully!! You have a gift!!!Great work, never stop writing!!!!!! P.S: this is sara from your humanities class :D xoxox

on Nov. 27 2010 at 9:41 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Wow, this is soooo beautiful!!! I love the Notebook, and this just makes me want to watch it again! You are one of the most amazing writers I'm glad to know! lol Your work will one day be published maybe not on this website but it will none the less get published and i know that everyone will love it and those who don't, well they don't know what talent you hold! Keep it up, I'd give you more than 5 stars rating, but that's as  high as it goes. lol hahaa Don't ever stop writing!

on Nov. 8 2010 at 9:49 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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THANKS!

SURE  I WILL CHECK SOMETIME THIS WEEK!


MRose911 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2010 at 9:37 pm
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

This... is amazing! I love the movie The Notebook!!! It's so stinkin cute! :) You are an amazing poet! Thanks for sharing! :) Please check out my work if you get the chance! :)

on Oct. 26 2010 at 8:16 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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THANKS  IT MEANS A LOT!

on Oct. 26 2010 at 12:54 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

wow great poem!!!!

jlw11 SILVER said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 10:49 am
jlw11 SILVER, Fayette, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"The only things in life you regret, are the risks that you never take."

You're welcome of course! (:(:

on Oct. 20 2010 at 9:17 am
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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THANK YOU!!!!

jlw11 SILVER said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 9:07 am
jlw11 SILVER, Fayette, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"The only things in life you regret, are the risks that you never take."

Wow, this was really great! I loved it! I loved how there was a story inside the poem. You did a great job! (:

on Oct. 19 2010 at 7:48 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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THNX! MEANS A LOT!

on Oct. 19 2010 at 12:43 pm
socrprncss12 SILVER, Weslaco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
With God, Anything is Possible

tht was so hearwarming and i liked the whole story played on in the poem

on Oct. 14 2010 at 2:02 am
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/251916/isnt-that-low/

There ya go! :) I am pretty sure it will work if it doesnt let me know, um you can check out some of my other poems too i think if you like click more by this author or something idk :P :)


on Oct. 12 2010 at 9:20 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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HEY COULD U SEND ME A LINK TO UR WORK CUZ I CANNOT FIND ANY!!!

on Oct. 12 2010 at 8:53 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

Anytime! :) thanks so much! comments and ratings are much appreiciated

on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:51 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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THANK U SOOOOO MUCH! SURE I WILL DEFINETLEY CHECK UR WORK! RIGHT AFTER DINNER!

on Oct. 12 2010 at 12:12 am
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

AHHH! I absolutly love love love this poem! ITS SO AMAZING! one of my absolute favorite poems ever! :) I LOVE THIS PEOM! (: so stinking cute with such strong emotion...good job! :) check out my work? I'd love to hear your opionion


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