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September 20, 2010
By Nikkira3 SILVER, Colfax, Iowa
Nikkira3 SILVER, Colfax, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
If one door closes, another door opens.


A smile not hidden
Is my pain written
A laugh shown
Is a back stabbed
A hug given
Is a heart stolen
A tear fallen
Is a heart crashed


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on Oct. 4 2010 at 9:10 am
Nikkira3 SILVER, Colfax, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
If one door closes, another door opens.

thank you! i would have never noticed that i repeated that.

on Oct. 2 2010 at 3:09 pm
A.Bekah.Girl GOLD, Menlo Park, California
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this is quite lovely.

i like the emotion.

i'm not sure about the last line. "a heart crashed" sounds a little awkward, and you are repeating heart. think about changing that line?





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