My love

September 16, 2010
By pavi112 BRONZE, Los Alamos, New Mexico
pavi112 BRONZE, Los Alamos, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"This scar is a fleck on my porcelain skin"


Your brown eyes I get lost in just imagining all the amazing things they’ve seen
And the sound of your voice could make any worry in the world disappear

When I’m with you I can just be myself
I finally feel comfortable in my own skin
Not having to worry about what I need to do to please another or how I need to act

Your impressions can make me laugh even when I’m in the worst moods
I say that I'm over you but at the end of the day I lay in bed and think of your face
I miss you

And after all we’ve been through in the end I want to thank you
I love you


The author's comments:
i wrote this poem for my boyfriend Craig while we were in a relationship. I gave it to him and the day after we broke up. I put the poem in a box deep in my closet. A few months later I decided to take it out and rewrite it so its up to date.

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on Oct. 8 2010 at 1:13 pm
brbrewer BRONZE, Los Alamos, New Mexico
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life is beautiful

This is beautiful. You have some talent.


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