August 21, 2010
By , Hayesville, NC
my vision is blind
where could i possibly be
a room without windows
a dark foggy sea
no life
only sorrow
as i sit here and scream
falling into an unpleasant sleep
a nightmare
no fear
run away
never looking back
the past is done
whats done
is over
I can't change who I was
and you will never know
who I am

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iluvwriting This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 4:31 pm
I love it, though a bit of rewording could have made the rhythm work a bit better
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