Perfection

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Pristine turquoise liquid
Caressing soft white sand
They kiss

and kiss


and kiss
Under a ceiling of immaculate sky
Lovemaking to the breeze's melody

The rush of the waves
like

sighs

of

bliss
Inaudible,
yet Thundering
Under the sting of the fiery sun
Giving birth to watery diamonds

And the minutes

race away

slowly

Veils of shadow




fall
From the palm tree canopy
Offering sheer shelter to
The entwined lovers,

Sand


and


Ocean

Fluid fingers of salt
Polishing milky beige skin
Fall asleep as one
On the flawless

Summer


Day.





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iluvwriting This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 4:29 pm
Great figurative language, I love the imagery--but it somehow lacks emotion, something to work on
 
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