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September 7, 2010
By Sean Ahern SILVER, Middleton, Massachusetts
Sean Ahern SILVER, Middleton, Massachusetts
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Your tumultuous

(Spin

Cycle)
Love was
The bittersweet
Crunch.
Of sand in
Sweethoneyhamonwheat
One g.r.a.n.u.l.a.r
Day at the beach
Or was it the
Wre TCH ing

Swirling
Oilpaint
Canvassed carousal lights
One as..phyx..i..ated
Night at the carnival


The author's comments:
Love is not simple. There is no single metaphor for it. There is only movements and sounds.

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on Sep. 24 2010 at 3:25 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I love the originality of this. It's unlike anything I've ever read! Great job, unique style, I love it. Could you check out some of my stuff? Keep writing - you've got talent.


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