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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 3:25 pm
I love the originality of this. It's unlike anything I've ever read! Great job, unique style, I love it. Could you check out some of my stuff? Keep writing - you've got talent.
 
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