I See A Girl (Part Two)

September 8, 2010
By CokeWaldoMichelle BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
CokeWaldoMichelle BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
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I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
Her eyes are bright red.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
She wishes she were dead.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
People stop and stare.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
She wants someone to care.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
All she does is cry.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
And she wants to die.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
Her path you'll never cross.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
She is no one's boss.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
You can't read her mind.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
They always leave her behind.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
She's broken inside.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
She will always hide.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
No one knows her ways.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
Searching for better days.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
Forever she's alone.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
Her voice a pathetic tone.
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
Don't you hear her plea???
I see a girl,
An ugly girl.
That ugly girl's still me.


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on Nov. 10 2011 at 6:43 am
redneck,girl PLATINUM, Fowler, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
ooo Hot boy.....but u have a bf.........you can look just cant touch.
~Mom

agree.....

on Oct. 7 2011 at 8:58 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

its exactly how I feel. I wanna say great job but I don't like feeling that way. its a great poem, but the feelings suck. wouldn't you agree?

on May. 6 2011 at 5:53 pm
SeeAndBelieve SILVER, Stratford, Other
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Save me from myself
I can't relate
We're mouth to mouth
And still I suffocate
There's nothing left
Inside of me to break
Save me from myself
Save me from myself
There's nothing left inside me
There's nothing left

It makes me cry...Keep it up.




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