Why didn't you call, when I needed you the most?

September 6, 2010
By Ghostwriter92 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
Ghostwriter92 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Your life is a gift. Accept it. No matter how screwed up or how painful it seems to be. Somethings are going to work out as if they were destined to happen... As if they were just meant to be"


Why didn’t you call when I needed you the most?
Sitting on my bed waiting for your call.
2 p.m. turned to 5 p.m.
But you still hadn’t called.
I sunk into despair, wishing you were here
Why didn’t you call when I needed you the most?
I finally had to realize you weren’t going to call
And that’s what started my greatest fall.
Here I am stuck in this hole
Waiting for you to extend the pole
No one comes
5 p.m. turns to 8 p.m.
But still there is no pole
I sank into despair
Wishing you were here
Why didn’t you save me when I needed you the most?
I finally had to realize, you weren’t going to save me
So again I went for a fall
Now I’m in hell
Wish you weren’t here
Just wished you had called when I needed you the most.

The author's comments:
My friend said she'd call me, but she never did that day, so I wrote this poem about how I felt.

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on Sep. 23 2010 at 12:38 pm
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Eminem: Success is my only option, failure's not

i really feel u i understand wat ur teying to say and iv been there b4

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on Sep. 21 2010 at 8:32 pm
LindsayB GOLD, Aston, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't need to be brave every minute of everyday, just a few seconds at a time."

couldn't have said it better myself :(

on Sep. 21 2010 at 3:45 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

This makes me sad, it makes me think of my boyfriend, well...ex now...anyway, I really like this poem and it has great structure!

on Sep. 21 2010 at 10:37 am
kissingdarkness SILVER, Mill Creek, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
lets see............ be yourself

thats really good i feel like that now

on Sep. 20 2010 at 6:24 pm
spoarder SILVER, Ankeny, Iowa
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this is really good, and i can really relate would you mind reading some of my stuff too?

on Sep. 20 2010 at 4:08 pm
-LeftBehindBroken- GOLD, Providence, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Artists paint on canvas; Musicians paint on silence

i like this poem. it makes me feel the hurt along with the narrarator and i can reason with it because ive been there. relating to the readers is best :)


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