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Why didn't you call, when I needed you the most?

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Why didn’t you call when I needed you the most?
Sitting on my bed waiting for your call.
2 p.m. turned to 5 p.m.
But you still hadn’t called.
I sunk into despair, wishing you were here
Why didn’t you call when I needed you the most?
I finally had to realize you weren’t going to call
And that’s what started my greatest fall.
Here I am stuck in this hole
Waiting for you to extend the pole
No one comes
5 p.m. turns to 8 p.m.
But still there is no pole
I sank into despair
Wishing you were here
Why didn’t you save me when I needed you the most?
I finally had to realize, you weren’t going to save me
So again I went for a fall
Now I’m in hell
Wish you weren’t here
Just wished you had called when I needed you the most.





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just-a-joy said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 12:38 pm
i really feel u i understand wat ur teying to say and iv been there b4
 
CountryGothic said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 3:45 pm
This makes me sad, it makes me think of my boyfriend, well...ex now...anyway, I really like this poem and it has great structure!
 
Writerchick1996 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 8:32 pm
couldn't have said it better myself :(
 
always-sunshine said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 10:37 am
thats really good i feel like that now
 
spoarder said...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 6:24 pm
this is really good, and i can really relate would you mind reading some of my stuff too?
 
CoLdEsTNiGhTs said...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 4:08 pm
i like this poem. it makes me feel the hurt along with the narrarator and i can reason with it because ive been there. relating to the readers is best :)
 
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