Hate and Loathing MAG

September 4, 2010
By xkissofcrimsono SILVER, Little Silver, New Jersey
xkissofcrimsono SILVER, Little Silver, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no progress; like a crab on LSD, culture staggers endlessly sideways." -Rem Koolhaas


I'm nothing but hate and loathing
Bits of flesh and kerosene
Burning with a passion
For the life of the serene
I've ripped apart the rule books
Carved my hate into my skin
Torn down those around me
Only to hide what's within
I'm nothing if not angry
Clear as much as confused
In all I have failed miserably
By my own mind been abused
Trapping myself in my own web
Spun through my own lies
Separating me from myself
Ignoring my own cries
I needed help
I wanted none
So now you see
What I've become
I'm the essence of disbelieving
While seeing it all plain
Drowned myself from the inside out
Because I had the power to make it rain



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minniemouse said...
on Apr. 29 2016 at 10:54 am
this was beautiful

on May. 21 2014 at 2:30 pm
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Can't keep my eyes from the circling sky,
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earth-bound misfit, I"
~Pink Floyd

"Now is blessed
The rest
remembered "

~Jim Morrison

oh my gosh how did you write this? This is just too good. I'm seriously impressed. You're rhyming was so creative and it flowed perefectly. And you're ideas were so spot-on and tangible. You have talent. :)

on Apr. 9 2013 at 11:33 am
this poem is amazing  

on Sep. 23 2010 at 9:24 pm
xkissofcrimsono SILVER, Little Silver, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no progress; like a crab on LSD, culture staggers endlessly sideways." -Rem Koolhaas

While I appreciate that someone else knows what I've felt like, I hope it's not all the time that you feel like this. This particular poem was a huge catharsis after which I began a much-needed recovery process. As awful as I had felt, I was able to build back from the hole I had fallen into and get back to enjoying my life the way I should. It's definitely a process, but it's a worthwhile one.

hasu said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 11:09 pm
i feel like this all the time

uhilu25 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 2:22 pm
uhilu25 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
3 articles 3 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
i am not bound to win,but i am bound to be true.i am not bound to succeed,but bound to live up to what light i have. -abraham lincon

<333333 great poem!

on Sep. 20 2010 at 4:13 pm
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER, Okawville, Illinois
9 articles 3 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
If it doesnt break your heart it isnt love, if it doesnt break your heart its not enough. Its when youre breaking down with your insides coming out.Thats when you learn what youre made of.-Switchfoot<3

wow. this was amazing. breath taking. keep  writing

<3 Sami



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