In Time

August 22, 2010
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Lay over me
Shelter me for tonight
Absorb all of my poisons and
Protect me from the pollutants
Of the outside world
Though I will find a way in time
To ruin everything we have built up
Simply because
I can't hold on
To anything
This Good

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gymnastgirl11292 said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 7:34 pm
This is beautiful! Keep writing please! I absolutely love it!
Kaitt This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 7, 2010 at 7:42 pm
this is absolutely beautiful and it makes me think of myself not being able to hold onto the good things because i think i don't deserve them. i love your imagery and the emotions you convey, very very good work ! (:
sunrise_faerie replied...
May 12, 2011 at 9:01 pm
 thank you for the compliment, but I would like to say that i'm sure that you deserve any and every good thing that ever happens to you. I don't know you, but I do know that everybody deserves the good things in their lives. Just wanted to say that. Thanks for reading!!!!
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