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Someone New

I waned you to know,
I've found someone new.
Someone that I love
More than I ever loved you.

He shows everyone
How he feels about me.
He's not ashamed that were together,
That;s how its supposed to be.

"Can't fight your feelings",
As you used to say.
There are two paths in front of me,
The one with him is the one on which I'm going to stay.



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justwannabeme said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 5:20 pm

awesome! this speaks from the heart and is great. check out my work? i would like some feedback please! :)

 

 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 7:26 pm
thanks i will check it out!!!
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 5:08 pm
I did like this! It's very simple... yet I liked it. Indeed, we must always make choices; so I say choose what your heart says. 'Can't fight your feelings.' Well said!
 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 7:29 pm
well thanks so much!!!
 
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