When It Comes

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Will we go back around?
In circles
Like love-wrecked fools
How we feel
Day after day
I want you now,
Let’s not focus on forever,
Just today.
And tomorrow?
That’s a new day
When it comes, it comes
We’ll worry about it when it comes
We’ll be back around





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 5:30 pm
Ah, well said! Indeed, repition is what rules many of our lives. I loved reading this, for it seems true; its message says to enjoy the moment. I like the rhythm and wording,  so well done.
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 5:32 pm
I'm sorry; for some reason I couldn't really comment more than a few words on your other article. So I apologize if I was annoyingly brief and repeated comments. I also seemed to miss that your story didn't relate to you. Oops.
 
SimplySloan replied...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 12:08 am
Thanks so much! And it's fine, really. Don't stress it (:
 
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