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Walking along
Lots to do
I stop
Suddenly overwhelmed
By the sight
By the scent
It’s beautiful
Continue walking
One second gone
Life goes on
But I stopped to smell the roses
And it meant something




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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 6:07 pm:
Awesome!!! This was done in 15 seconds???
 
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Penn-State-UniversityThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 21 at 8:33 pm:
I wasn't going to comment but then read that you did it in 15 seconds. That's pretty good in itself. But the poem is pretty good too! I wonder what you could do in 15 days....
 
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LittleSully said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 11:46 am:
Sometimes your best work comes out in a short amount of time, when you just don't think you just write! Great poem:)
 
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SilverLunaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 4:19 pm:
This is amazing, and a fantastic record to have under your belt, chickadee!
 
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CinnannonbreadMonsterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 9:48 pm:
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! :D its so meaningful, like the roses. ^^
 
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flawless200This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 4:45 pm:
=) WOW... Masterpiece!!!
 
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SeraphimTalmidim said...
Dec. 26, 2010 at 7:59 pm:
good poem Thorn. im into poetry myself, check out "Precious Love". i think u might like it.
 
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