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The guy stares at me and smiles
not hearing my heart beating for miles
and I tremble,

quiver with fear
all of me wishing that he was here
to comfort and cool me.
Emotions drain into my cup
asking to be poured, spilled onto the
table for him to see
that I liked him.
His hair with soft swirls swirled
my consciousness
a stirrer in my coffee
full of emotions.
Love and want, hate and fear
things inside me that've been
twisting for years
ready to be offered to him.
Ready to ask the question

"Shaken or stirred?" just to hear
those words slur and purr in my ears.
The only question now is if this drink
is ready to be served.



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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2013 at 11:42 pm
Great ending :) I love it!
 
Lexie96 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 9:11 pm

Really good and very pretty:) I like it!

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MissFaber said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 7:57 pm
I absolutely love love love it.
 
IJustWannaSmile said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 8:52 am
really really good. very interestingg
 
Llama2341 said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 4:09 pm

I love it it and all of your other work!!!!!!!!!!!!

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amyscarlett This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 1:37 am
I love all the descriptive words and the flow of this poem. It's a really interesting metaphor that definitely emphasizes all the emotions. Nice job! :)
 
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