Mouth-to-Mouth, Hand-in-Hand

August 7, 2010
By Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee


My face lights up when I see you across the room.
I wait for you to come, almost unbearably.
You reach my side and I whisper
“Hello, I missed you quite terribly.”

You’re hand is in mine,
Who knows where you're pulling me along,
But any where with you
Is where I belong.

We’re now more than friends
Possibilities endless,
The deeper feelings no longer
Have to be suppressed.

We are tangled together
But without any knots,
We were made to fit together
Like a set of Lincoln Logs.

Dream and reality
Magically becoming one.
Like the starry night sky,
Being lit up by the sun.

Your mouth is on mine
You’re stealing my breath away.
(Like you momentarily forgot your manners,)
You pull back politely to ask “May I?”
I respond to your goofy grin by saying “You may.”

We’re grinning all the while,
The happiness is too much.
I try to reign it in,
But it starts again under your touch.

Your hand on my cheek, on my neck
Around my wrist.
My fingers in your hair, on your back,
Against your chest.

I’m not worried about tomorrow
Or where we will stand;
There is only this moment,
Mouth to mouth, hand in hand.


The author's comments:
:D Aaaah, what can I say? This poem sums up one of the happiest moments of my life thus far :) Enjooooyyyy!

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on Oct. 1 2010 at 4:07 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

You're welcome a TON! This is definately one of my favorited poems I've read on TeenInk!! Great work!

on Sep. 30 2010 at 8:36 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Ahw, Thanks a ton :) The last verse is my favorite too.

on Sep. 30 2010 at 7:43 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Oh! I just LOVE this! It's beautiful it made me smile reading it. My favorite part was the end

"I’m not worried about tomorrow
Or where we will stand;
There is only this moment,
Mouth to mouth, hand in hand."

 :) perfect!


on Sep. 14 2010 at 9:29 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :)

on Sep. 13 2010 at 5:35 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

I really like this.




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