Can anyone hear me?

August 18, 2010
By aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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Im standing in a line and say what I want
Yet just like always I get the same response
What? they say
And so the questions in my head go mad
Why cant you hear me when I speak clear
There’s no crowd
No one screaming here
How’s the girl next door being heard so easily near
Then I repeat in a scream
Yet no one turns around as she hands me what I need
I say thank you after please but she doesn’t reply
For being polite really isn’t that polite if no one hears your simple words right?



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on Sep. 29 2010 at 6:37 pm
aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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awh thanks!:)

WriteON SILVER said...
on Sep. 29 2010 at 1:57 pm
WriteON SILVER, Grand Meadow, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why they call it the present."
--Oogway from Kung Fu Panda

i love it!!! especially the last line...ur just a little genius lady :)


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