Freespirit

August 12, 2010
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For long I had longed for freedom
Now the time has come;
To break free from the shackles who bind me to explore!
Its time that I be a free bird.
Time to spread my wings.
No longer am I the diffident person you once knew;
My knew life beckons me ut old ways run deep;have me in their grips.
But I know for sure it is evanescent.
My life wont exacerbate for the worst has passed.
You made my life a living hell,it has been odious since.
But now the time has come and I will be a free flying bird!
I am a free spirit,not to be caged!





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Ruby-Paige-Rose said...
Oct. 5, 2012 at 1:07 pm
I know exactly what that poem was talking about. You did a really great job.
 
Iloveme This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 5, 2012 at 1:14 pm
thanks so much rose. :)
 
Kanupriya said...
Oct. 5, 2012 at 8:11 am
wow....what an enrapturing poem! :)
 
Iloveme This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 5, 2012 at 8:20 am
thankss kanu :D
 
MonsterGirl2000 said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 1:29 pm
I love this peice. It describe alot of feelings.
 
Sarah_is_me replied...
Oct. 5, 2012 at 5:48 am
This a great poem that talks about wanting to be yourself and to well "be free" :D I love these kinds of poems, and I love yours! One think that really stood out to me was that you addressed the shackles that bound you as a "who" and that as a "that". That really adds emphasis and structure to your poem. Great job and keep it up!
 
Iloveme This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 5, 2012 at 8:18 am
Thank you so much Sarah, I really appreciate you words! :D
 
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