Freespirit

August 12, 2010
By TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
89 articles 4 photos 201 comments

Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories


For long I had longed for freedom
Now the time has come;
To break free from the shackles who bind me to explore!
Its time that I be a free bird.
Time to spread my wings.
No longer am I the diffident person you once knew;
My knew life beckons me ut old ways run deep;have me in their grips.
But I know for sure it is evanescent.
My life wont exacerbate for the worst has passed.
You made my life a living hell,it has been odious since.
But now the time has come and I will be a free flying bird!
I am a free spirit,not to be caged!


The author's comments:
This is just a thought which came to me sitting in biology class.

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on Oct. 5 2012 at 1:14 pm
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
89 articles 4 photos 201 comments

Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

thanks so much rose. :)

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 1:07 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

I know exactly what that poem was talking about. You did a really great job.

on Oct. 5 2012 at 8:20 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
89 articles 4 photos 201 comments

Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

thankss kanu :D

on Oct. 5 2012 at 8:18 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
89 articles 4 photos 201 comments

Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

Thank you so much Sarah, I really appreciate you words! :D

on Oct. 5 2012 at 8:11 am
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them."

wow....what an enrapturing poem! :)

Sarah_is_me said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 5:48 am
This a great poem that talks about wanting to be yourself and to well "be free" :D I love these kinds of poems, and I love yours! One think that really stood out to me was that you addressed the shackles that bound you as a "who" and that as a "that". That really adds emphasis and structure to your poem. Great job and keep it up!

on Oct. 1 2012 at 1:29 pm
MonsterGirl2000 SILVER, Des Moines, New Mexico
9 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
When it seems like there’s no one left to run to in this empty world you can come to me I’ll be your shooting star. You can tell me your dreams I can’t promise to make them come true, but I’ll be there to pick up the pieces of your broken heart if your dreams happen to fall through…Unknown

I love this peice. It describe alot of feelings.


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