Picking Petals MAG

August 18, 2010
By stuck_in_the_past GOLD, Lakeside, Oregon
stuck_in_the_past GOLD, Lakeside, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Three may keep a secret if two of them are dead" ~Benjamin Franklin


It's kind of like picking petals off a flower
You love him
Then you don't
Then you're not sure
Now you wish you never knew him
Then it starts all over again on a different flower
One with more petals
More thoughts
You're sick of it
The flowers are an endless cycle
But winter's just around the corner



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on Feb. 3 2011 at 5:59 pm
stuck_in_the_past GOLD, Lakeside, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Three may keep a secret if two of them are dead" ~Benjamin Franklin

thank you, i consider it one of my more optomistic poems because of that line, lol

Apeggy BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 10:31 am
Apeggy BRONZE, Albion, New York
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Favorite Quote:
A.B.D"A Beautiful Dream"

This poem is bautifully written. My favorite line was when you said winters around the corner it just put a nice twist on it. Grat job!


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