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The Moment After

Photos.Pictures.
They trap the moment.
Sometimes I wish I had
The courage
To rip up the ones we took on
THAT DAY.
Rip them up
Like you did to my heart on
THAT DAY.
But I kinda want to remember
THAT MOMENT.
The one when we are happy.
Not the one that
Came after the pictures.
Because
THAT MOMENT
I wish I could rip up.





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bound4life4ever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 1:00 pm

u need 2 stop showing off nd write some not-so-good poems sometimes! =) lol..jkjk

amazing again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really relate to this w a previous guy..-_-

love it=)

 

 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 7:07 pm
hansk again  and im sorry i wrtie to good for you lol JK!!! thanks again for the nice comments!!
 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 12:00 pm
I really like this poem and hope everyone can relate to it like you and I do. :)
 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 7:15 pm
awwww... thanks!!
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 3:05 pm
Amazing - Super relatable. Short, sweet and to the point. Nice job :)
 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 4:09 pm

thanks!!!! thanks for all of your feedback!! it means a lot to me!!

 

 
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