I See Where You're Coming From

I guess I kind of
See where you're coming from.
I mean, I'm leaving and
I know we cant be together
While apart.
And you were great to me
And I'm sad about leaving.
But I hear that's not really the reason you broke me.
Broke my heart that is.
So if that's not the real reason,
I guess i CAN'T
See where you're coming from.





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bound4life4ever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 12:58 pm

i do that too! wake up randomly i mean nd have a peom in my head.. or its usually at dinner. ill b eating. get a poem nd end up writing it on a napkin lol

weel i noe ur work nd u noe mine...so its no surprise u did UH-mazing. once again=)

nice job girl=)

 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 7:06 pm
well thanks!! it means a lot to me that you commented on my stuff!!!
 
ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 12:01 pm
ooh! It's short, sweet and to the point. LOVE IT!! :)
 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 7:15 pm
thanks!!! lov ya elle
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 3:08 pm
I really like this one - you said so much with so little. I can relate. Keep writing1
 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 4:10 pm
Thanks it was kinda funny cuz i woke up at like 3 in the morning, went to my desk and wrote this!!
 
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