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As I recall,
The moonlight was falling over me on that night.
The night I saw the stars as angels.
It was the night when the wind sang,
And the softest sound a joyous shout.
As I recall,
It was the night when I danced in the rain,
And the sunshine danced with me.
It was the night when the crickets played for me,
And the trees whispered gentle words.
It was the night when my eyes were opened.
As I recall,
It was the night I found faith.



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through_my_eyes said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 8:18 pm:
okay haha this is the third one i adore. Keep writting your stuff is amazing!!!
 
maggiebar1 replied...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 6:09 am :
thank you! ill be sure to come check out some of ur stuff!
 
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awesomeaugustThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 4:47 pm:

LOVE it! the slight imagery was simple but so...beautiful

perfect job!

~sofia~

 
maggiebar1 replied...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 6:08 am :
thank you so much! that was one of the main things i always worry about on this one is not enough imagery... that helped to boost confidence!
 
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