Rose Petals

August 11, 2010
The Beginning
She, sweet lips
I, lips unbothered
She, sparkling black eyes
I, pale sunken eyes
She, cold body
I, warm body
She, dead heart
I, dead soul
Us, dead love
The Middle
When heaven cries, I cry
She is gone
And I am alone
The End

Soft satin graces my skin
A sweet aroma fills my body up to the brim overflowing with gayness
Rose Petals kissed to I

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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 3:27 pm
Wow, very creative poem. The wording is delightfully unexpected and unique. I like the subtle comparisons. Well done!
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