Lace-Trimmed Roses

July 25, 2010
In my future
There is darkness;
An unfortunate fate I can’t deny.
In my existence
There is brilliance;
Somehow previously blind to my eye.
But when my future is no longer mysterious,
And when my stomach churns like the waves,
I come to my senses and understand
There is beauty in every thing, in every day.





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AshTree said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 11:52 am
I like this poem and it's really true. I think it could have been longer and described things, like the things before you never noticed the beauty in, but I really do like it. You're a good writer keep it up.
 
HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoul This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 6:40 pm

Thanks!

And yeah, it definitely could have been longer :)

But I think I got out the basics...I was rushed on time and then too lazy to finish it later :3

Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate it!

 
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