Brother? No longer.

Wheels slow
train stops
click
clang
door open
guns
run!
guns
cant...
old man falls
bye mom
head heavy
want water
line up
step right
step left
please feet, keep moving
deep breath
no time
gulp
screams
mine?
not yet
"hello world! help us!"
world gone deaf
skies blue?
skies grey?
who cares
few more steps
selection
go left
left good?
left bad?
no matter
feet walk left
older brother told to go right
"i with brother" he says
grunt
chuckle
bang
brother?
no longer





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DevinQuin said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 10:10 pm
Wow. Intense, really places you in that time and place.
 
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