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July 19, 2010
By Danadolly PLATINUM, Florence, Kentucky
Danadolly PLATINUM, Florence, Kentucky
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My knight in shining armor
Only has armor on his characters in Dungeons and Dragons
My knight in shining armor
Is a nerd—But he shines to me

My knight in shining armor
Has grey eyes when I always thought I loved brown
My knight in shining armor
Sometimes loses in card game tournaments, but he always wins to me

My knight in shining armor
Prefers to battle with small pieces of cardboard
My knight in shining armor
Is way sexier than any prince

My knight in shining armor
Makes me cry, but never too much
My knight in shining armor
Is like a cool spring breeze—he refreshes me

My knight in shining armor
May not be yours
But my knight in shining armor
To me, will always shine.

The author's comments:
My boyfriend inspired me to write this piece.

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on Aug. 24 2010 at 2:46 pm
Danadolly PLATINUM, Florence, Kentucky
21 articles 3 photos 7 comments
Thank you! I'll definitely check out some of your stuff!

on Aug. 24 2010 at 1:53 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

i think it's really sweet that your boyfriend inspired you to write this. the best poems are written from real-life experiences because they sound the most real. this is something that everyone can relate to and that's why i really like like this piece. you're a great writer!

you can rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!(:



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