satisfaction

July 26, 2010
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eyes cradle the curl of her fingers
wound in a loose spring around the
barrel of a wooden pencil.
what sight cannot provide is the
physical satisfaction she craves--
eyes recieve, gifts small they hand out
in the form of appreciation, but this
is pleasure to one side of the party...
the giver knows not of the thoughts
lips would speak for eyes can't.





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chrisbriones said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 12:31 am

This has touched me even to the deepest crevices of my being. I cannot even begin to describe how this makes me feel. I yearn for more.

You are truly deserving of being called a poet--one who awakens the emotions. Thank you..

 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 5:36 pm
I love this captain. its simple and awesome and deep. do your dance captain.
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 11:36 am

Wow...

This is very....deep...and imaginative. You've created several images in these few lines. Very powerful. Keep writing.!

 
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