July 29, 2010
With a few harsh words,
You crushed my world.

With a few stupid actions,
pain became the reaction.

I may have set myself free,
But at times i wonder,
If i'll ever cross your mind.

At times I think of the moments we shared.

If we meet in a few years,
Would i even recognize your face?

If i see you again.....
Would i even remember your name?

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forget_me_not said...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 11:28 am
beautiful poem
forgottenangel replied...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 2:01 pm
Thanks for your support :)
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 7:39 pm

this is a great poem! i love the ending. it leaves me wondering with intrigue. i can really feel the raw emotion in this. it takes a true author to do that!

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. keep writing! great job on this!!(:

forgottenangel replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 12:23 pm
Thank you so much that really means alot :)
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