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Twist and turn.
Whip and whirl.
Around and around.
It's all
upside down.
Anyone
have an answer?
Up and down.
Spin, spin,
and spin.
They don't
flutter and fly,
like delicate butterflies.
Explosives is
what they are.
Tick-tocking.
Counting the
steps you take
to reach me
and the blinks
of your eyes
until you speak
to me.
Tick-tock
Blink, Blink.
I inhale.
You exhale.
Pull me close
and I burst.
My heart;
Boom Boom.
My insides;
Pow!
My world,
now upside down.
Spin, spin
and spin.
Around and around.
Twist and turn.
Whip and whirl.
You make my insides
go pow!

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SilverInkThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2015 at 11:47 am
so simple yet wonderful
 
vazenitran98 said...
Mar. 31, 2012 at 4:23 pm
This was amazing!! I liked the simplicity of it.
 
Kgirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 30, 2011 at 2:51 pm

This is so good and original and creative!!

 

 
evrycloudyday7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 10:12 pm
thank-you! ;) 
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 11:36 am

wow, i love how original this is. it really is nothing like the black eyed peas son! you constructed this poem very nicely. i especially love the end, where you say, "you make my insides go pow!"

you can rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!(:

 
evrycloudyday7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 1:16 pm
thanks so much! and yes, i will def. look at some of your writing as well
 
banana This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 27, 2011 at 6:17 pm
yeah!!!!!! this poem is fantastic christina!!!!!! i miss u!
 
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