Boom Boom Pow MAG

July 29, 2010
By evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what counts." Seneca
"I'll just read a book instead. I don't care if we're just friends. I can hang out with myself I'm old enough now to pretend. Bam ba dum ba dum ba dum." kate n


Twist and turn.
Whip and whirl.
Around and around.
It's all
upside down.
Anyone
have an answer?
Up and down.
Spin, spin,
and spin.
They don't
flutter and fly,
like delicate butterflies.
Explosives is
what they are.
Tick-tocking.
Counting the
steps you take
to reach me
and the blinks
of your eyes
until you speak
to me.
Tick-tock
Blink, Blink.
I inhale.
You exhale.
Pull me close
and I burst.
My heart;
Boom Boom.
My insides;
Pow!
My world,
now upside down.
Spin, spin
and spin.
Around and around.
Twist and turn.
Whip and whirl.
You make my insides
go pow!


The author's comments:
Not anything like the black eyed peas song ;) Comment if you like.

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on Apr. 1 2015 at 11:47 am
Lysander PLATINUM, Bangalore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I slay.

so simple yet wonderful

vazenitran98 said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 4:23 pm
vazenitran98, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I had the blues because I had no shoes until upon the street,I met a man who had no feet."

This was amazing!! I liked the simplicity of it.

on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:12 pm
evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
28 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what counts." Seneca
"I'll just read a book instead. I don't care if we're just friends. I can hang out with myself I'm old enough now to pretend. Bam ba dum ba dum ba dum." kate n

thank-you! ;) 

Kgirl BRONZE said...
on May. 30 2011 at 2:51 pm
Kgirl BRONZE, Hopewell Junction, New York
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This is so good and original and creative!!

 


on May. 27 2011 at 6:17 pm
banana PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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yeah!!!!!! this poem is fantastic christina!!!!!! i miss u!

on Aug. 24 2010 at 1:16 pm
evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
28 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what counts." Seneca
"I'll just read a book instead. I don't care if we're just friends. I can hang out with myself I'm old enough now to pretend. Bam ba dum ba dum ba dum." kate n

thanks so much! and yes, i will def. look at some of your writing as well

on Aug. 24 2010 at 11:36 am
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow, i love how original this is. it really is nothing like the black eyed peas son! you constructed this poem very nicely. i especially love the end, where you say, "you make my insides go pow!"

you can rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!(:



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