The Promised Truth

July 16, 2010
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It's the crazy, drastic secret
That you would never want anyone to know
The one that would leave you mortified
So you promise yourself-
Just one person.
They're my best friend
I know I can trust them with this secret.
Whispered urgently
Perfected reactions
Filled in-between electrified silences
*Gasp!* No Way!
Wow, I honestly can't believe it...
And so your promised tale
Began his remarkable journey of transition
Said friend tells her other best friend
Who in return notifies her best friend
All concluding with the same pitiful dramatic line--
But you have to promise you won't tell anyone....
It's a secret.
All devastating betrayals
Secretly suspected from the very beginning
You knew the secret would slip
Please, who did you think you were kidding?

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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 3:21 pm
ooo i really like this! its so true & portrays itself in both a unique and honest way. i luv writers who can put their own opinion and thoughts into their work rather bluntly, cuz it makez it all the more powerful. gr8 job!!:D 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 1:04 pm
awww thanks so much:) i really appriciate your comment and honest oppinion.
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