July 24, 2010
As I close my eyes I can cleary picture the strenuous toll that was plastered on the faces of thoes frail, thin frammed bodies.

Working from dawn til duskwith clinky,clanky chains wrapped around their feet.

They sing a sad, sowworful song to the hails thundering beat
I thank the Lord for where I am today
Saved by Him
As I easily could have been one of them.

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mrsneverjonas_899 said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 3:14 pm
woww. :) this is beautiful- i loved the 'thankful-ness.' ...tho it was horrible wat happened in the Holocaust.. this masterpiece just words the truth and .... i already said 'thankful-ness, so... :) anyway, this was greatt
fictionfanatic replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 7:52 pm
thank you so much for commenting!! Im an aspiring teen writer/author and it makes me so happy and proud when I get possitive/encouraging feedback!! thanks again so much!! :)
Niftygrrl said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 12:07 pm

I really like the idea of this.

Its short and sweet but its also very heartbreaking.

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