When I

July 17, 2010
By Heather3728 GOLD, Mastic, New York
Heather3728 GOLD, Mastic, New York
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When I close my eyes,
It’s you I see.
When I dream happy dreams,
They are all about you.
When I stare off into the distance,
All I can think about is you.
When I talk to you,
A smile is spread across my face.
When I see you,
I am filled with joy.
When I think of you,
I think of how I love you,
And how it will never be </3


The author's comments:
I was inspired by the love I feel around someone I like but he doesn't feel the same for me.

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on Aug. 10 2010 at 12:56 pm
Heather3728 GOLD, Mastic, New York
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Thank you, your comment means a lot =)

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 2:50 am
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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whew, i was waiting for the punch line. and i got it.  that last line is like a punch in the stomach. but awesome. Good writing. maybe get a few breaks in there, it eccentuates the story a little more.


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