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My temptation

The bittersweet lips of temptation;
oh, i long for the touch.
you are my destroyer,
as you hold me,
your my crutch.

Im sinking in your beauty;
oh,the love of what i hate.
You fill me with desire,
You haunt me with distaste.

You intoxicate my feeling,
You caress my brittle soul,
I love your pecious presence,
By my pain;
i pay the toll.

You are my onyx diamond.
Your darkness shines so bright,
i am covered my your safety,
full to my rim in fright.

You are my poisoned apple,
im flying as i fall.
oh, my dear temptation;
you shall end us all.



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XxLauraHatakeXx said...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 6:01 pm:
its supposed to be 'precious' not pecious  haha whoopsie
 
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percussionnerd1200 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 22, 2010 at 11:37 am:
This definately is my favorite so far (: I LOVE IT!!!!! <3
 
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ShytoyaB said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 8:15 pm:
very good poem...it was nicely put
 
XxLauraHatakeXx replied...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 4:25 pm :
thanks so much!
 
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