My temptation

July 17, 2010
By Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
53 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes


The bittersweet lips of temptation;
oh, i long for the touch.
you are my destroyer,
as you hold me,
your my crutch.

Im sinking in your beauty;
oh,the love of what i hate.
You fill me with desire,
You haunt me with distaste.

You intoxicate my feeling,
You caress my brittle soul,
I love your pecious presence,
By my pain;
i pay the toll.

You are my onyx diamond.
Your darkness shines so bright,
i am covered my your safety,
full to my rim in fright.

You are my poisoned apple,
im flying as i fall.
oh, my dear temptation;
you shall end us all.



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on Mar. 9 2011 at 6:01 pm
Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
53 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes

its supposed to be 'precious' not pecious  haha whoopsie

on Dec. 22 2010 at 11:37 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

This definately is my favorite so far (: I LOVE IT!!!!! <3

on Aug. 14 2010 at 4:25 pm
Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
53 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes

thanks so much!

on Aug. 10 2010 at 8:15 pm
ShytoyaB SILVER, Oxford, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's gonna be some stuff u gonna see that's gonna make it hard To smile in the future, but through whatever you see, Through all the rain and all the pain, you gotta keep your sense of humor. you gotta be able to smile through all this bull~"~tupac

very good poem...it was nicely put




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