What Will Happen?

July 16, 2010
If I stand here long enough,
what will happen to me?

Will I simply never leave,
will I stand here always
and forever?

If I stand here long enough,
what will happen to me?

Will someone take notice of me,
this lost little girl,
standing here?

If I stand here long enough,
what will happen to me?

Will I have a revelation,
a bright idea of sorts?

If I stand here long enough,
what will happen to me?

Will I simply stand here,
forever,
fade away into the walls?

If I stand here long enough,
what will happen to me?





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 3:15 pm
I love this, and I agree: the repitition of the words was a nice touch to the poem. Ironically, standing in one place and watching the world pass by can be very moving.
 
Anjo! said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 1:58 am
mhmm.. i like it. i like it mostly cause thats how my writing is sometimes. i love repeating the main part sometimes so i can the message across or something. very good. keep writing. =]
 
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