What thrived in the North

July 11, 2010
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It began with a single flower
Then bloomed into love
It created this constant fire
Flying to the skies was a dove
An extraordinarily elegant bird
That was the enchanted beholder
Of everything we were made of
Exemplifying our hearts in one set folder
He fluttered on North
To the single desired destination
Of what we are now
Cremated in our one set creation





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 1:48 pm
I simply loved this poem, and I admire the steady rhythm which flows within it. I may have said this before, but you have an extraordinary way with words.
 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 2:55 pm
oh my gosh, thanks so much:) i reallyyy appriciate your loving feedback. and it makes me extremely happy that you say i have an extraordinary way with words. thanks so much for that. and i cant wait to view some more of your work:)
 
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