What thrived in the North

July 11, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.


It began with a single flower
Then bloomed into love
It created this constant fire
Flying to the skies was a dove
An extraordinarily elegant bird
That was the enchanted beholder
Of everything we were made of
Exemplifying our hearts in one set folder
He fluttered on North
To the single desired destination
Of what we are now
Cremated in our one set creation



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on Aug. 25 2010 at 2:55 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

oh my gosh, thanks so much:) i reallyyy appriciate your loving feedback. and it makes me extremely happy that you say i have an extraordinary way with words. thanks so much for that. and i cant wait to view some more of your work:)

on Aug. 8 2010 at 1:48 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I simply loved this poem, and I admire the steady rhythm which flows within it. I may have said this before, but you have an extraordinary way with words.


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