I See Everything

July 9, 2010
By Erudite GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
Erudite GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
19 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
trust your heart
if the seas catch fire
(and live by love
though the stars walk backward)


I open my eyes
And seek my chance
My chance at justice
My chance in life

I open my eyes
And seek my heart
My chance at happiness
My chance at love

I open my eyes
And seek a refuge
My escape from horror
My flee from torture

I open my eyes
And seek nothing
Because nothing is there
Nothing will ever be there

I opened my eyes
And seek the world for what it truly is
It is hideous
It is real

I close my eyes
And I see everything.


The author's comments:
My brother is an incredible artist, and i got super jealous at one time, and wanted the attention he was getting. so i tried art, and lemme tell ya..IT WAS HORRIBLE. then i realized that he couldnt beat be at writing so i jumped onto my computer. i am seriously horrible at poems, but i just wanted to try it, so i did, and this is what i got!! hope u enjoy!

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Erudite GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 11:30 am
Erudite GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
19 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
trust your heart
if the seas catch fire
(and live by love
though the stars walk backward)

omg, thank you soo much!! what u have said makes me feel so happy!! thanks alot!!!! and i would love to check out your work!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:03 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

I love this so mcuh!!! its so great and the word choice is fabulous!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!




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