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I open my eyes
And seek my chance
My chance at justice
My chance in life

I open my eyes
And seek my heart
My chance at happiness
My chance at love

I open my eyes
And seek a refuge
My escape from horror
My flee from torture

I open my eyes
And seek nothing
Because nothing is there
Nothing will ever be there

I opened my eyes
And seek the world for what it truly is
It is hideous
It is real

I close my eyes
And I see everything.





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 9:03 pm
I love this so mcuh!!! its so great and the word choice is fabulous!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!
 
Erudite replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 11:30 am
omg, thank you soo much!! what u have said makes me feel so happy!! thanks alot!!!! and i would love to check out your work!!
 
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