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Told me so

You've always seen the bad in him,
The bad I refused to see.
All I saw were his brigt eyes,
The ones you always saw as dim.

When he was good to me,
You tried to warn me,
That it was all a trick.
But I refused to see.

Now I know
You were always right.
I should have listened.
And yes
" You told me so".





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bkcrider92 said...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 1:03 am
Ur seriously reading my mind! Maybe we should introduce our jerk exes cuz it sounds like they've got a lot in common haha =P
 
olican16 replied...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 6:31 am
lol... thanks!!
 
olican16 said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 4:49 pm
oh that makes me feel so great this is one of the poems i didnt know if i liked...well u helped me to love it!! thanks so much that means alot to me!!
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 9:52 am
Don't you just HATE being wrong about someone you thought you knew? You put this into words AMAZINGLY. Also, I really like the flow and rhyme scheme. Niiice.
 
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