Told me so

July 8, 2010
By poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11


You've always seen the bad in him,
The bad I refused to see.
All I saw were his brigt eyes,
The ones you always saw as dim.

When he was good to me,
You tried to warn me,
That it was all a trick.
But I refused to see.

Now I know
You were always right.
I should have listened.
And yes
" You told me so".


The author's comments:
When my best friend told me that my boyfriend was not who I thought he was, I didn't listen. But she was right. so if you're reading this I'm sorry.

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on Oct. 15 2010 at 6:31 am
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

lol... thanks!!

on Oct. 15 2010 at 1:03 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Ur seriously reading my mind! Maybe we should introduce our jerk exes cuz it sounds like they've got a lot in common haha =P

on Aug. 4 2010 at 4:49 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

oh that makes me feel so great this is one of the poems i didnt know if i liked...well u helped me to love it!! thanks so much that means alot to me!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:52 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Don't you just HATE being wrong about someone you thought you knew? You put this into words AMAZINGLY. Also, I really like the flow and rhyme scheme. Niiice.


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