I Want Real Love

July 26, 2010
By wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.


I promised myself,
I wouldn't fall for your lies.
But my lips quiver,
And all I can do is cry.

I have no one else,
But myself to blame.
You left me with nothing,
But sadness and shame.

How could I fall,
For someone like you?
I should have known,
It was too good to be true.

So many moments,
I begin to wonder,
How you did it.
My heart is what was plundered.

I've felt this way before,
And it hurts all the same.
It just gets you one step closer to the person,
Who finally makes you lose all the pain.

I want someone,
Who is true and loyal.
I want someone,
Who makes me forget about the pain and turmoil.

I want someone who loves me,
And doesn't just walk away.
I want him to see me for who I am,
I want to make him stay.

I don't want love,
To be one sided.
No longer torn,
Or even divided.


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wild18 SILVER said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 5:19 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

of course! thank you! :D

wild18 SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 12:45 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

Thank you soo muchh <3 

on Aug. 2 2010 at 2:53 pm
inksplatters21 SILVER, Mason, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Character is how you live when no one is watching."

This poem very eloquently describes that feeling that so many of us are familiar with.  great job.      would people mind reading/commenting on my stuff?  thank you

wild18 SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:41 am
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

awh, thank you! :)

wild18 SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:41 am
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

Thank you so much! :) 

wild18 SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:41 am
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

I really hope your right! haha

i tend to fall for the A-holes! 

but i'm glad i'm not alone out there :) 


wild18 SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:40 am
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

Awh, i really appreciate that! 

& of course i will :) 


wild18 SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:40 am
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

Thank you! & i sure will :) 

wild18 SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:39 am
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

Thank you so much & i sure will! 

on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:15 am
KelseyForLife SILVER, Moline, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life to the fullest. <33

This is amazing, i love how you put such big words in there. it goes really good with my life too. Nice job! :D

on Aug. 1 2010 at 2:14 pm
InkChick BRONZE, Desert Hills, Arizona
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I loved this!! I can totally relate! Your poem flowed so nicely! Great job!

on Jul. 31 2010 at 9:13 pm
Drizzle29 SILVER, Norwalk, Connecticut
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life has taught us that love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, Wind, Sand and Stars, 1939, translated from French by Lewis Galantière

omg awww! i can relate :( i'm sorry about this guy. there'll be a better one to come, promise!

on Jul. 31 2010 at 6:11 pm
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

This is AMAZING! You are very talented writer. Keep it up you could really go somewhere.

Check my work out if you can please (:


kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 3:23 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

I really liked this...It flowed very well :) Check out some of my stuff if you get the chance

on Jul. 31 2010 at 7:25 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow this is really good!! awesome job:) i really liked your structure and the message! please check out some of my work if you get the chance:)

on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:47 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

np gurl anytime

wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:44 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

wow, i really appreciate it! 

:) 


wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:44 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

awh thank you!

on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:40 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Wow, this is great! I can totally relate to this. I especially loved the line "It just gets you one step closer to the person, who finally makes you lose all the pain." That is SO true! Awesome job, and keep writing!

on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:29 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

i love it so much


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