July 6, 2010
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And the bloody feathers fell
into the pool of red
that lay beside the lifeless eyes
the once beautiful peacock
stripped of its pride

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TheRealAriel1995 said...
Jan. 3, 2013 at 12:51 pm
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Krysondra S. said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 3:46 pm
You have a profound abilty to into a random object, deeper than the surface, and describe it's condition in depth. Awesome!
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Nov. 15, 2010 at 2:06 pm
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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:20 pm
WOw im sure this is going to be put in the magazine!! This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
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