Stripped

July 6, 2010
By TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"


And the bloody feathers fell
into the pool of red
that lay beside the lifeless eyes
the once beautiful peacock
stripped of its pride


The author's comments:
poem i wrote a long time ago, just found it in one of my first entries in my diary. :)

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on Jan. 3 2013 at 12:51 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

Thank you so much! :) I really appreciate it and sure thing!

on Nov. 15 2010 at 2:06 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

thnx so much i really appreciate comments!

on Oct. 6 2010 at 3:46 pm
LovelyPeace08 BRONZE, Vestal, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Unforgiveness is the posion we drink till the other person dies."

You have a profound abilty to into a random object, deeper than the surface, and describe it's condition in depth. Awesome!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:20 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

WOw im sure this is going to be put in the magazine!! This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!




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